Comments on: The Thinking Box – 4 – A Noise in the Graveyard http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/ Tales from the In-Between Mon, 21 Jan 2008 17:53:35 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Basil Munroe Godevenos http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-17 Basil Munroe Godevenos Mon, 21 Jan 2008 17:53:35 +0000 http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-17 Thanks for the words of encouragement Mark. That's an interesting point, about Klaus being alone for too long. I'll take the suggestion into consideration when I write the next chapter. I think you may be right. Thanks for the words of encouragement Mark.

That’s an interesting point, about Klaus being alone for too long. I’ll take the suggestion into consideration when I write the next chapter. I think you may be right.

]]> By: Ken Godevenos http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-16 Ken Godevenos Mon, 21 Jan 2008 17:39:50 +0000 http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-16 Will he go to the castle next or will there be a diversion? A new complication? Klaus has been alone for too long (in terms of sentences) and before he goes on to pursue the eerie, perhaps a small bit of reality -- the contact of another human, even if for a moment, may serve us all well. But again, you are the author and we have not yet been invited to interact as to possible courses this tale may take. Good writing. Will he go to the castle next or will there be a diversion? A new complication? Klaus has been alone for too long (in terms of sentences) and before he goes on to pursue the eerie, perhaps a small bit of reality — the contact of another human, even if for a moment, may serve us all well. But again, you are the author and we have not yet been invited to interact as to possible courses this tale may take. Good writing.

]]> By: Mark http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-15 Mark Fri, 18 Jan 2008 01:10:37 +0000 http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-15 Provocative, Basil! Good stuff. Keep it comin', please. -Mark http://www.writedamnnow.com Provocative, Basil! Good stuff. Keep it comin’, please.

-Mark
http://www.writedamnnow.com

]]> By: Basil Munroe Godevenos http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-14 Basil Munroe Godevenos Tue, 15 Jan 2008 17:26:38 +0000 http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-14 Good to hear! LOL Good to hear! LOL

]]> By: Benjamin Allison http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-13 Benjamin Allison Tue, 15 Jan 2008 17:11:51 +0000 http://theunderbrush.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/the-thinking-box-4-a-noise-in-the-graveyard/#comment-13 She's-a getting good! My brain... SHE WON'T-A SHUT OFF! She’s-a getting good!

My brain… SHE WON’T-A SHUT OFF!

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