The Thinking Box - 4 - A Noise in the Graveyard
January 15, 2008 by Basil Munroe Godevenos
A Noise in the Graveyard
Klaus collapsed to the ground, pressing his face to the still relatively fresh dirt of his wife’s grave. He was as close to her as he could be, like this. Tears streamed across the the bridge of his nose and onto the tiny blades of green grass, already sprouting, as he let his grief kill his anger and fear.
Tiny blades of green grass. In the darkness he could barely make them out but they were there.
Klaus had watched his wife’s coffin be lowered into the ground and covered in dirt. He had seen the funeral director seal the coffin shut with Klara’s body inside. The dirt above her grave was still relatively fresh, yes, but it already had grass growing in it. It was impossible that this grave had been dug up again since the funeral. The verdant green of the new growth testified to that. This ground was undisturbed.
Klaus felt relief was over him. Following closely behind was renewed anger. How could someone torture a widower like that? Worse, how could the respectable Klaus Drecker be so foolish as to believe so ridiculous a claim. Murder and grave-robbing. Nonsense.
There was a noise then, in the nearly pitch dark of the graveyard, so faint that Klaus wouldn’t have heard it if his ear had not been pressed against the earth. It was a scraping noise, perhaps of a shovel cutting through stony dirt. It seemed to come from farther down the row of graves. Klaus rose and walked along the row, treading softly. He came to another fresh grave, this one with no grass yet growing, and the funeral flowers still barely wilted at all. The sound was loudest here. Yes, certainly a digging sound, but no-one was digging here, that could be plainly seen, even in the dark.
But perhaps … The sound was muffled. It was coming from underground!
Klaus silently dropped prone once more, pressing his ear to the dirt. He could hear the shovel scraping against wood. He listened for a few moments, until he heard a loud thump, then a dragging sound.
Someone was robbing the graves from underneath!
Oh, horror! My Klara! What if it’s true?
Klaus ran through the streets once more, aiming for the constabulary. What was he thinking? Who would believe a half-crazed grief-stricken man who had not left his house since his wife’s funeral, especially when he looked as if he’d been crawling around a cemetery. He must go home and collect himself.
Klaus opened the door to his workshop.
Whoosh-Whump.
Klaus opened the canister.
NOW YOU SEE
NOW YOU KNOW
COME TO THE CASTLE KLAUS
A chill ran up Klaus’ spine.




She’s-a getting good!
My brain… SHE WON’T-A SHUT OFF!
Good to hear! LOL
Provocative, Basil! Good stuff. Keep it comin’, please.
-Mark
http://www.writedamnnow.com
Will he go to the castle next or will there be a diversion? A new complication? Klaus has been alone for too long (in terms of sentences) and before he goes on to pursue the eerie, perhaps a small bit of reality — the contact of another human, even if for a moment, may serve us all well. But again, you are the author and we have not yet been invited to interact as to possible courses this tale may take. Good writing.
Thanks for the words of encouragement Mark.
That’s an interesting point, about Klaus being alone for too long. I’ll take the suggestion into consideration when I write the next chapter. I think you may be right.